Monday, September 29, 2014

Corrected version of Assignment 4


Corey Bodden

JMC 303 Assignment 4

            Ryan Forde and Scott Doney secured the first goals for Marshall men’s soccer, but it was not enough to secure a victory on Sunday against the Liberty Flames as the game ended in a 2-2 tie after two overtimes.

            A handball by Liberty near its own goal in the 32nd minute led to a penalty kick for Forde, sophomore from London, England. Forde hit the back of the net to score Marshall’s (0-2-1) first goal of the season and tied the game at 1-1 after Liberty (2-0-1) struck first at Hoops Family Field at Veterans Memorial Soccer Complex in the 27th minute with a goal by Bay Kurtz, freshman from Crown Point, Indiana, after an assist from Blessing Tahuona, junior from Harare, Zimbabwe, in the 27th minute.

            “I think we broke the ice today,” head coach Bob Gray said of the first goals of the year. “It was like getting the monkey off your back to get a goal. We just have to be a little more efficient when we get into the final third and especially when we get into the box.”

            Troy Reeves, freshman from Keller, from Keller, Texas, took the ball himself and scored to give Liberty the lead in the 54th minute. Liberty seemed to be in control of the match until Doney, freshman from Tauranga, New Zealand, received a pass from Matt Freeman, junior from Irmo, S.C., in the 6-yard box and scored the equalizer in the 84th minute.

            With the teams tied 2-2 sudden death overtime decided the match with a 10-minute period followed by another if necessary.

            Marshall controlled both overtime periods getting off five shots compared to zero from the Flames, but none of the five shots slipped past Liberty goalkeeper Scott Sutarik and Marshall was unable to secure its first victory of the season in front of 414 spectators.

            “I think we just need to keep working. We need to keep practicing,” Forde said of what the team needs to do to win a match. “We’re still a relatively young team, mostly juniors and freshmen, so (we) still got a lot to learn. If we keep practicing together hopefully things will gel.”

            Marshall outshot Liberty 20-9 and secured more corner kicks 6-5 despite Gray changing the line-up multiple times.

            “They’re (Liberty) one of the top teams in the Big South (Conference), but I thought it was our game to win today,” Gray said. “We need a lot of work. We’re young.  We’re really trying to find the right combinations out there. We found out a little bit about ourselves today.”

            Gray and the Thundering Herd will look for its first victory on Monday Sept. 15 as Appalachian State (0-3-1) invades Hoops Family Field.

            “We’ve got seven days off, which is a blessing,” Gray said. “App. State will be a good test for us, but with the seven days of work that we have maybe we can do some of the right things that’ll produce a victory for us.”

 

Corrections made:

1. In the lead paragraph I inferred the team scored the goals rather than the actual players. I should have identified the players in the lead.

2. I did not list the class the Liberty players I mentioned are. (Freshman, etc.) Easy fix and lazy mistake as I had the information in my game notes provided by the sports information department.

3. I made the apple/oranges mistake. I mentioned the team scored its first goals of the season, but did not mention who scored the goals for Marshall and instead talked about Liberty first.

4. I did not properly stylize “head coach.” Easy fix now that I for sure know the correct way to do so.

5. I failed to mention the high drama of overtime until midway through the story. That is an important fact and would draw the readers in to see how it got to that point.

6. I used an editorial phrase “Unfortunately for Marshall...”. A silly mistake and an easy fix to not editorialize in any story not an editorial.

Monday, September 8, 2014

Marshall Men's Soccer Plays Liberty to 2-2 draw (Sunday 9/7)


Corey Bodden


            Marshall men’s soccer scored its first goals of the season, but it was not enough to secure a victory on Sunday against the Liberty Flames as the game ended in a 2-2 tie.

            Liberty (2-0-1) struck first at Hoops Family Field at Veterans Memorial Soccer Complex in the 27th minute with a goal by Bay Kurtz after an assist from Blessing Tahuona.

            Marshall (0-2-1) answered a few minutes later. A handball by Liberty near its own goal in the 32nd minute led to a penalty kick for Ryan Forde, sophomore from London, England. Forde hit the back of the net to score Marshall’s first goal of the season and tied the game at 1-1.

            “I think we broke the ice today,” Head Coach Bob Gray said of the first goals of the year. “It was like getting the monkey off your back to get a goal. We just have to be a little more efficient when we get into the final third and especially when we get into the box.”

            Troy Reeves took the ball himself and scored to give Liberty the lead in the 54th minute. Liberty seemed to be in control of the match until Scott Doney, freshman from Tauranga, New Zealand, received a pass from Matt Freeman, junior from Irmo, S.C., in the 6-yard box and scored the equalizer in the 84th minute.

            With the teams tied 2-2 sudden death overtime decided the match with a 10-minute period followed by another if necessary.

            Marshall controlled both overtime periods getting off five shots compared to zero from the Flames. Unfortunately for Marshall and the Thundering Herd faithful among the 414 spectators none of the five shots slipped past Liberty goalkeeper Scott Sutarik and Marshall was unable to secure its first victory of the season.

            “I think we just need to keep working. We need to keep practicing,” Forde said of what the team needs to do to win a match. “We’re still a relatively young team, mostly juniors and freshmen, so (we) still got a lot to learn. If we keep practicing together hopefully things will gel.”

            Marshall outshot Liberty 20-9 and secured more corner kicks 6-5 despite Gray changing the line-up multiple times.

            “They’re (Liberty) one of the top teams in the Big South (Conference), but I thought it was our game to win today,” Gray said. “We need a lot of work. We’re young.  We’re really trying to find the right combinations out there. We found out a little bit about ourselves today.”

            Gray and the Thundering Herd will look for its first victory on Monday Sept. 15 as Appalachian State (0-3-1) invades Hoops Family Field.

            “We’ve got seven days off, which is a blessing,” Gray said. “App. State will be a good test for us, but with the seven days of work that we have maybe we can do some of the right things that’ll produce a victory for us.”